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Reality - A Short Story

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  1. A1ex_CT99

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    This is what happens when I think too much about the Multiverse Theory.

    Prologue and Part I are up, I'll write Part II and III and upload them later.

    "Out of it all, two things stood forth--their love and the image of the great sails, tissue-metal wings with which the bodies of people finally fluttered out among the stars."
    -- The Lady Who Sailed The Soul
    "I feel so naughty demanding soft-core from a minor." - Isobel (Not kidding)
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    Sweet man! Insane sci-fi short story it is! Can't wait to read the rest!

    Btw,

    <Part II will be posted later on. Part II (Last part) is already done and will be added with Part II.>

    ...what? I'm glad part II will be added with part II...:P

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    awesome story!

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    Dvan, I leave you for 5 minutes and you get yourself in a coma... tsk tsk tsk...

    Great story Alex

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    Nice one

    I can write short stories, too:

    REALITY ON PASTELFORUM

    Once a guy named A1ex_CT99 created a thread called "Reality - A Short Story" in the Submachine forum. The forum's almighty administrator, who was furious about the desecration of his holy place, pushed the delete button.

    The end.

    Okay, it's probably not the most elaborate story...:P

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    Once a guy named A1ex_CT99 created a thread called "Reality - A Short Story" in the Submachine forum. The forum's almighty administrator, who was furious about the desecration of his holy place, pushed the delete button.

    The end.

    *facepalm*

    ...what? I'm glad part II will be added with part II...:P

    Sorry, I meant that Part II will be posted with Part III (because Part III is already done and I haven't written a word of Part II)

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  7. A1ex_CT99

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    Rest of story published in the same blogpost.

    Link: http://pleasegodno.wordpress.com/2010/02/08/reality-a-short-story/

    For some reason the font is different, whatever.

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  8. Isobel The Sorceress

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    Very nicely done, sir.

    “I contend that we are both atheists. I just believe in one fewer god than you do.
    When you understand why you dismiss all the other possible gods, you will understand why I dismiss yours.”
    -Stephen Roberts
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    Wow. Finally, I know someone else belives in the All Universes Are Real theory as well! Very unique story, and could be recommended for the scientific and philosophical concepts alone.

    kitty
    IM IN UR FORUM, CLOGGING UR THREADS.
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    lmfao total Avatar plagiarism... xD

    still reading

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    Nice story, Selena.

    I've read the prologue of Alex's story, and I'll definitely come back to finish it, but I kind of have work to do. (Translate: I'll probably start doing a little of my work in an hour or so. )

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    ...selena?

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    lmfao total Avatar plagiarism... xD

    look up the definition of "Avatar". It fits.

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    look up the definition of "Avatar". It fits.

    Yes it totally does.

    Nice story. Interesting ending as well...

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    And if you do the math:

    Moment the story ends - voyage time =

    2157 - 80 = 2077

    Part I and II are set in 2077. Mind = blown amirite?

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